Please be honest: What do you think of my writing (it is a book review on the diarry of Anne Frank)?

I am 13





Anne Frank: The Diary of a Young Girl consists of diary entries written by a Jewish teenager named Anne Frank. Anne Frank is comfortably living with her mother, father, and sister in Amsterdam when the Nazis start taking Jews to concentration camps. The Frank family is forced to flee from their home and live in the building where Anne's father worked with another Jewish family by the name of Van Daan and an old dentist named Dussel. The eight Jews hide in these quarters, called the "Secret Annexe", for two years. In her diary, Anne Frank encounters the difficulties of becoming an adult, the progress of World War II, and the philosophy that men should be valiant and happy no matter what.


The book is amazing. I particularly suggest teenagers and other Jews to read this book, for teenagers will relate to Anne's experiences as you ages in the book from thirteen to fifteen years old, and Jews will be again reminded what happened during this time and what we should learn from it.

Please be honest: What do you think of my writing (it is a book review on the diarry of Anne Frank)?
It needs more information. Like what did they do while in hiding? tell about how Anne interpreted her family and the Van Daan's. I did a slide show on Anne Frank and I made sure I got every single information about her and everyone else (I got an A). I also read her diary and it was very moving. I think I went to a bunch of websites and such and her story is very moving. So you need more information.
Reply:it's really good, especially since you're only 13
Reply:it's good
Reply:its cool
Reply:It's good, but a bit short. I'm not up on my politcal correctness, but I think you should say Jewish people instead of Jews.
Reply:Hey!


well its short and simple wich is good,cause some people have to go through book rewiews which on and on and om


yours has it all narrowed down,Try and squeze in some more fact abt her!Other than that its simple and makes it Sound! intresting!which it is.Great book!eh~


Keep it up


GOd Bless